Improvements to my first draft

After comparing my cover to another I realised there needed to be more range in text size, and overall smaller text.

My double page article also needed to have its contents made smaller to fit more on and have less white background showing on the page.
I need to add in or change photos to give a better range of shots, however it is conventional to have head on shots in photos of magazines, though these range from long shots to close ups.
I need to add an introduction to make it more like a magazine article and bulk up the text.
Finally I would like to add in more arrows with written style font text.

This week I have started to improve my draft by making some of these changes, but there is still a lot of tweaking to do.